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5:21 pm
April 26, 2012
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QuoteI don't know Why But my squeeze page on Facebook ads don't perform well. Well by other hand I my twitter squeeze page is converting pretty descent which is at 25%.
My click through rate on Facebook ad is also good which 4.63% something like that. I tested different types of things on Facebook. Like adding videos and pictures of mine but nothing is working. It's converting at Zero percent which is way too bad I have had overall performance is something like this 200 clicks but Zero sign ups.
What should I do? I even try to match the tone of my ads to my squeeze page, even though I used same image but still it's not converting. I tried everything that john has suggested me. Even though I gone through With lesson called copyrighting for Musicians. I learned so much over there. I learned there that I to use my own USP. I applied those techniques to my squeeze page and try to speak my own language and experience on my squeeze page. But still it not working as results.
On other hand, my twitter squeeze page which worst by the way but it is still converting at really good percentage. I mean what happened to Facebook. I used my Facebook ad squeeze page to other pages on Facebook with no paid ads. And this time these are converting good. I mean what happened to my Facebook ad. I know my squeeze page is good. But when it comes to Facebook ads it gets paralysis.
Can I create different ad on Facebook to what happening to my squeeze page. This is really really frustrating me. Cause twitter traffic is trick not an evergreen strategy like SEO or Paid Ads. That's why I want my squeeze page is convertible on Facebook ads. 200 clicks and no sign ups there's definitely something is wrong.
I know my targeting is good. I target Michael Jackson fans above 26 years old US demographic people. Those are just perfect for me. Even though my first sale came from United States. So my targeting is not wrong. Somebody please help me with this. I could give access to my Facebook ad campaign John please check my matrix.
I am planning to invest 2000 dollars for my music career. So before I proceed I need to fix this problem first.
Thanks for the support.
8:07 pm
June 9, 2011
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Hi Vishal,
Steve here. I recommend you post the link to your squeeze page, so that we all can take a look and offer suggestions.
8:52 pm
June 7, 2011
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Hi Vishal,
A couple of things...
You appear to be using a testimonial from me that I did not give. You really can't do that. The language is not even language I would use. It appears you have done the same thing with Steve. Please take those down and replace them with genuine testimonials. You need to request a testimonial from someone before using it, and you need to quote them exactly. This is really important from an ethical stand point.
There are a few problems that I see here.
1. The squeeze page is not written in fluid American English. It's close, but it doesn't read very narurally, to an American. That alone is going to kill conversions.
2. I also think Michael Jackson is to broad of a targeting option.
3. Your squeeze page copy needs to do a better job of communicating to the interests and desires of your target audience, before it will begin to convert.
The reason you are likely converting well on Twitter, is because you are relying on a more authentic relationship. They follow you, then you message them, and by the time they get to your squeeze page the are already partially sold. the same is not true of FB advertising.
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10:16 pm
April 26, 2012
OfflineHey Sorry John,
Extremely Sorry for this. Actually I used this as an example for my squeeze page. It was old one. Here is my squeeze page which I removed all quotes from you. Thanks for the letting me know about this. Extremely sorry Again John.
http://www.vishalpawarsongs.co.....free-music
I also used to these squeeze pages for my Facebook ads but nothing seems to be working. Hope you understand this. Anymore suggestions from you about squeeze page is most welcome john.
10:57 pm
April 26, 2012
OfflineI have changed everything. I don't have any social proof right now. That is I haven't received any quotes from big people in the industry. I know I am a really very good musician and dancer than anyone else out there. But thing is that I don't need any quotes from anyone else to show I am legit or not. You see, liked my music and dance then go ahead you will definitely gonna love me. I know these days nobody is buying music and we are selling our experience not that talent we have. But I believe is that if I have those 2 things in place it will be best for which is extraordinary music and proper sells funnel in place.
I received quotes from my friends in India. But they are powerful as you said I don't speak American language in that style as an American will do. But I believe that Americans really good and very happy people in the world. That's not my fault that I haven't born in America. But yeah... I could hire a few American writers to write my squeeze page and all those sells letter. Thanks for letting me know that I don't sounds like American.
I have completed my aim for selling music online which I dreamed when I was teenager. Now it has become true in reality and I can stop everything right now. I don't have to be a loser in my own eyes and I proved myself that I am not loser. I am proud that I have sold something online. Now I don't care whether or not I will gain money or I will lose everything.
Thanks for everything and enormous support from you John. You are doing an Amazing job.
11:11 pm
April 26, 2012
OfflineI have seen that there are so many people on Fiverr who are giving a great quality testimonials experience via video which is pretty surprising for me. I will use them as testimonials in the future on my squeeze page.
3:04 am
June 7, 2011
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Hi Vishal,
Thanks for taking them down. It's just always very important to ask someone before quoting them.
I think the biggest issue right now is that your squeeze page is not written in clear American English. One can completely understand it, it's just not fluid with the way people speak. I'm also not clear, You tell us about your music, but show us you dancing to Mark Rosas' music. That's a pretty big disconnect.
Your dancing is really impressive. I kept watching to see if you were using a computer to simulate some of those movies. It;s very cool. However the background is a bit odd. Looks like a kids classroom. And the music isn't yours. Can you see how this is not a very consistent experience and doesn't do much to motivate someone to sign up?
Having trouble with your marketing? Wish you could have an experienced direct-to-fan marketing expert look over your actual campaigns, music, or content and offer feedback? Or perhaps you’re just looking for a little one-on-one assistance so you can ask questions that pertain to your specific goals and get a second, more experienced, perspective? Click here to book a session with me now.
10:32 am
April 26, 2012
OfflineHey John,
Thanks you so much for your opinion about my dancing.
Actually I didn't use any computer effects on the movie, those are real moves, pure dancing. Definitely I will check your suggestions on this. I will make a video on my music as well as I will write my copy in pure American English.
11:46 pm
June 7, 2011
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Sounds good. It might serve you to just have someone from America give your squeeze page a quick re-write once it's done. If you can't find someone then maybe you could post it in chunks here in the forum.
Having trouble with your marketing? Wish you could have an experienced direct-to-fan marketing expert look over your actual campaigns, music, or content and offer feedback? Or perhaps you’re just looking for a little one-on-one assistance so you can ask questions that pertain to your specific goals and get a second, more experienced, perspective? Click here to book a session with me now.
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